MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[4koma Girls- It's hip to be well-rounded]

Some of the poses the characters were in are a little inconsistent. Especially at the start. The designs and character writing are great. I like the pause effect of the panels when they are done animating, but the colors on the characters disappearing is distracting, like the character on the right in the first panel, since her pupils were black maybe they should stay black? I also noticed you included the characters names in the description, but as a new viewer I don't know who is who.

The voices were good, but the line delivery needs to be convincing, the mic quality also didn't help as there was background noise in the recordings. The glasses character has a fitting voice but the second sounds like a boy, and I wasn't sure if that was on purpose. Some backgrounds might also contribute well to the comic instead of the blank white void! I hope you improve.

zachdewd responds:

Thanks man.

[You can't commision me]

the animatic is okay. the laugh cutoff was really strange, and the blue is hard to see. poses and expressions need to be easier to read in the boarding stage. I couldn't tell if the hands were meant to be peace signs or "okay" hands. keep working hard!

dew60 responds:

Yeah I think I might fix a little the next time I revisit

[Scared of Me - Kheil Animation]

The animation is so good, I love your style and the background is exceedingly simple but gorgeous nonetheless. I admire the short for what it is. Great work!

BMBrice responds:

Thanks a lot! I wanted to keep the BG simple since I'm trying out 3D paintovers

[Sublo Gets A Battle Royale]

This was a fun parody, I loved the voices. Great stuff dude

Tiltro responds:

Let the seas be calm and the wind be short, I would like to rest and wait till the chief comes and greets the morning and I don’t where I’m going with this. The voice actors are cool their stuff is very cool.

[POPIPO (Cupid you’re Stupid)]

Cool short, theres a bit of a flash in the middle of the animation, try rewatching it a few times to make sure there isn't any dead space. Nice job timing the legs with the song!

DranoinmyBraino responds:

Ugh, you’re right- sorry :(

[GAS PUMP-CHUMP]

Very eerie setting, creepy looking with great acting. I loved the part where she said "look at me" haha. The car hole was also very gross, I love it. Excellent work dude!

MaxJohnsonINK responds:

Thanks very much ShoeShine!

[THE HALLUCINAPE LABS [PS2]]

This looks so freaking cool! You beyond nailed the playstation aesthetic. I love what you've done here, with the characters and the 3d animator did a great job.

jumpbreak96 responds:

i am the 3D animator (and modeler) (and texturizer) (and basically everything except da musik)

[RE4 Remake Ada vs Leon]

This is a really solid fight loop, the sound effects and music were spot on, but I wish there was more color, both in the characters and the backgrounds. Nice work!

Bronksson responds:

Thank you very much! I wish I'd added more to it too and had more time to polish, but next time 🙏🤓

[OneyPlays Animated - Lyle’s New Groove]

Oh man, everything was so well animated, I loved the logo at the start and the sound effects. Great job animating these doofs they are so funny! The backgrounds are nice and simple. Nice!

CRIPSYNG responds:

Thank you sm!!

[Prank]

The background music was good, but its almost nonexistent because of how quiet it is. I guess that's better than it being too loud though. This was a fun and funny little short, I like the character design on the main guy but the extra or roommate was really bland, you should make him a character too!

ComixGuy927 responds:

thank you for dis comment