MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Commission prewiev chart🍷]

really good animation, especially the smoke and teleports, but why didn't you finish it? this is for your commissions so you should show what you can do including colors. hopefully more finished anims to come?

LordMaksMiks responds:

Video is a prewiev its still being coloring and ended soon

[Full Automation Trailer]

the animation was okay, the style is what put me off most. it feels like the line thickness was always different and changing scene to scene. the voice was fine but without subtitles i dont think i could understand it. i know this is for a game but it could use some help.

5ta5 responds:

Valid points, I rushed the trailer a little bit (and didn't get the chance to redraw the lineart) :P
As for the voice, i tried and i failed, i really wanted a robot voice ... that's why it is hard to understand .... that's why the subtitles are there :}

[just a slime jumping]

pretty good animation, i think it needs some more spongy feeling in the air, the squish on the floor is really flat. good background and good track.

DocArt responds:

yeah, i was thinking the same, it would look so nice if ithe slime look more, squishy or smth, thanks for the feedback

[The Cute Cat Collab (2022)]

very cute kiddies

Zellas responds:

oh yea

[A Strand Type Animation]

so funny, i love the art style and the jump cuts are very honest

STANNco responds:

honest jump cuts

[Cassy says thanks for the follows]

pretty good blink animation. congrats!

Unlikelyturtle responds:

If only you could have seen me recording myself blinking was a struggle but thank you!

[Duel #1 (Murat Demo)]

That was a bit too much tekken gameplay. Then you used gulty gear soundtrack? That was random, they turned into stick figs and then human again, kinda inconsistent. And i would forgive the white void background but you can spice it up with something. the animation carried. come on man! keep it up

Boingo05 responds:

thanks for your comment, I'll try to make it better next time

[100+ Followers]

good short loop, very minimal but good and nice style.

Unlikelyturtle responds:

Thanks :)