MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Plane'N'Simple]

I really like how it came out, the way the panels are frozen, play and stop is exactly how I imagined it in my head. I like the title, its very creative since the old one, "The Paper Plane Collab" is not only boring, but it makes it seem like we only do paper planes and yearly which neither are true. I like that the styles are so different, everyone did great. ^^
I think it's time I revealed what Fera is really saying in the last panel. I had this idea of how Fera would react to the abrupt ending to the plane race, and niggit was all for it. When I made it there wasn't any mp3 to lip sync off, so I had to imagine the line in my head and attempt to animate it off the cuff. It was a bit difficult but I think it reads well, so what shes actually saying is, "oh, COME ON!"

Niggit responds:

LMFAO damn Shoe why didn't you say it when I probbed :sob: I would have said "oh, come on" instead of "what the hell"

But same as what I said to Mochi thank YOU for being so patient. Without you guys the collab wouldn't have been the same. Now I know what to do and how to be more organized. Difference in expectations and all but honestly when it sailed smootly with zero set back it was really fun.

editing should be less clanky the more I practice it ^^
Cheers for the ones to come !

[Step On Bug]

Cute! Loved the short and the characters. great job, but whats a nomad sculpt?

Inkhandprint responds:

A 3d sculpting app for iPad

[Zwic - animated short film v1]

I think the backgrounds are astonishing, great job drawing the perspective, doing the coloring and camera panning on the scenes. The boys animation is good, but some parts are a little slow. the perspective shots where the camera follows the boy are wonky and seem a little disorienting. The music is fitting and the characters are all nicely designed as well. Overall good work, but there are parts that just need a little more time and care.

SALCUL responds:

Thanks for your message. I plan to enhance it.

[Failing Upward: Sick Day]

Wow this was really fun. I like the main characters a lot, great voice acting. I think the flashback scenes were my favorite parts, they were so well animated. The music choices were nice, everyone did a good job.

WaeBakStudios responds:

Thanks dude! Hope you stick around for more.

[STICKERFACE]

Cute animation and style. The writing is surprisingly good, the alien girl tossing the candy at their friend was a little rude, so it seemed unrealistic to me, but maybe thats the nature of their friendship. The voice acting was great, and the credits were creative. Nice!

sugarofcube responds:

There's actually a reason why the alien acts kind of strange sometimes! I wrote them as being autistic and having a different approach to social situations, so they don't know how to comfort their friend and maybe come across as a bit inconsiderate at times, but they show that they deeply care in a way that makes sense to them: remembering everybody's favorite snacks and making sure to come prepared with them even if it gets in the way of things.
Just adds some more interesting dynamics to the character interactions, I think (:
Hope that clears it up, thank you sm for the positive feedback ^ ^

[Introducing Debbie Sparks]

This was a crazy ride. Great acting, animation, and concept for a short film all rolled into one. All the music choices were perfect and you nailed the crazy-insane look! The robotic creation known as Debbie Sparks was creepy and when he was cutting out all the eyes and putting them on the wall, almost like he does want some attention shows how far from reality this guy really is. The ending was a bit of a cliff hanger! It's symbolic how the rock and the man was resembled by Debbie and the main character. Really great work.

MaxJohnsonINK responds:

Thanks very much MrShine!

[Dr. Good's Operating Theatre 2023]

Ah man. I did wanna create something for the 5th dr. goods operating theatre, but alas I couldn't find the time. I fell in love with the show last year, and seeing this years version of it is very different. There were a lot more shorts shorts that were (or felt like) bumpers. Some of the animations were very random and didn't have a full closure, while others were silly great and spooky. I love seeing dr good come on as his 3d self, its always the perfect way to start interrupt and end the show. Gianni killed it as usual!

DannyGoodShirt responds:

Hope to see your dreams be dissected next year... by the Good Doctor!

[Krinkels.mp4]

Super cool ideas in here. I think krinkles being in madness is a fun idea. I like the premise being somewhat dumb but serious and the animation is really good. The final boss guy died really quick but he was very OP. There was lots of jittery animation bits in here which was okay. Nice job to everyone in this.

thece responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[tree people]

I love these little tree people! This is so cute and the animation is really good. I liked seeing the different variations of them and how derpy they all looked when popping up and growing about. Great job on the coloring too!

Goji responds:

Thank you!!

[Three of a Kind]

I think a video/movie like this will be better seen on youtube. The only animated bit was the beginning and it was absent from the credits. The plot and the bio both don't make sense. Coincidence? I think NOT.

claykidNG responds:

This was for the NG live action jam back in September