MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Full Automation Trailer]

the animation was okay, the style is what put me off most. it feels like the line thickness was always different and changing scene to scene. the voice was fine but without subtitles i dont think i could understand it. i know this is for a game but it could use some help.

5ta5 responds:

Valid points, I rushed the trailer a little bit (and didn't get the chance to redraw the lineart) :P
As for the voice, i tried and i failed, i really wanted a robot voice ... that's why it is hard to understand .... that's why the subtitles are there :}

[just a slime jumping]

pretty good animation, i think it needs some more spongy feeling in the air, the squish on the floor is really flat. good background and good track.

DocArt responds:

yeah, i was thinking the same, it would look so nice if ithe slime look more, squishy or smth, thanks for the feedback

[TORD SPEAKS NORWEGIAN]

i love the flash quality, really brings me back, i thought this was really funny. i love tord clearing his throat

willag responds:

your not so bad yourself

[How to animate in clip studio paint in 5 seconds]

this is not a tutorial haha... besides that the style looks great but the animation is minimal. you needa few more inbetweens my guy!

Ganet responds:

ok ok thanks for the feed back my guy

[The Cute Cat Collab (2022)]

very cute kiddies

Zellas responds:

oh yea

[A Strand Type Animation]

so funny, i love the art style and the jump cuts are very honest

STANNco responds:

honest jump cuts

[Cassy says thanks for the follows]

pretty good blink animation. congrats!

Unlikelyturtle responds:

If only you could have seen me recording myself blinking was a struggle but thank you!

[Duel #1 (Murat Demo)]

That was a bit too much tekken gameplay. Then you used gulty gear soundtrack? That was random, they turned into stick figs and then human again, kinda inconsistent. And i would forgive the white void background but you can spice it up with something. the animation carried. come on man! keep it up

Boingo05 responds:

thanks for your comment, I'll try to make it better next time

[100+ Followers]

good short loop, very minimal but good and nice style.

Unlikelyturtle responds:

Thanks :)

[DandyWare Inc Mega Microgame$ Intro]

you did a good recreation of wario ware, but since all the characters are different from the ones in wario ware, it kinda feels like a ripoff, more so like this could be more unique. your character also sounds like wario, since you kept the sound effects in with the recording of the game. the sound was also nothing new.

Mikey1105Grounds responds:

Well it's actually a parody of the intro but with different OCs and the one who sounds like Wario isn't my Character, anyways thanks for the reply!