i love the writing, but the jokes weren't funny, and i will admit the end was a little abrupt despite it being part of the joke. i mean the fact the time machine appeared and they were sitting there for 14 seconds felt too short. Also at the end the scientist character didnt have the smiley face drawn on his brain helmet, it would of been nice to see him wipe it clean as they teleported back or something. the jokes being jump cuts is mainly what i didnt like. so many cuts and it didn't treat the project nicely. I would relate this more to a family guy skit than anything else. like i said i like the writing but the pacing was decent, again the jump cuts ruined it for me. since this is an animatic/storyboard i cant say much for the animation. but my least favorite was the voices, i would suggest getting other talent to do some of the characters, im not a fan of the pitching of your own voice for other characters.