MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tryna Find Those Hot Chips]

This came out so good! I love the story and how quick the jokes are. I can’t believe this is your first flash, it’s so fun.

I wanna start with the obvious, the things I didn’t really like. The little dots scattered about from stray pen taps you left in, and the entire palette was black, white, grey, and red. Because you limited yourself the backgrounds were simple but non-intrusive, and since that was your style choice it was consistent in the sense you didn’t bend or break it as a little ‘soft rule.’ The voices are impossible to hear at some points without the subtitles, thank goodness you added those! The mixing of the audio can use some work balancing the sound and voices.

Great job making the characters silly and stand apart from each other. It's a bit unclear on what the two main characters' names are but they have a good dynamic, and Heather just adds to it with her chaos! The story is simple and you made it such a crazy adventure all in a simple alleyway. I love the little character splash screens with the quick facts. It has a random feel with all the references and animation techniques. I love the rotoscoping, so many scenes are hilarious with the vast changes, and the small details like the red circle on Heather, the chip bag with the scream sfx, and little throw away lines like the demon saying “wait watch this- this is actually pretty funny.” make it tie together! The hot chip demon was such a treat how he was boisterous but also quick to back down after the fight. So many memes crammed in here as well, I can’t even count them all! The robo… B00-BOY he was on screen for like 2.7 seconds and I loved every bit of it. All the voices were different enough to tell who was talking by just listening. The style was cute and sketchy, very fitting and fun to watch. The ending finished with such a good punchline, great job and I can’t wait for the masses to witness this piece.

[Ironmouse: Time to Feast Trailer]

would be cool tho.

BUBIIII

[Wn'M #2 – Watch Your Step]

Not the yoda death sound effect xD I love your clean and quality animations, this is a fun and well made short! Great animation and your character is fun and very emotive. I like the fitting bgs and bgm you include in your videos too, all the sound effects really tie it together. I love it!

The only thing I would suggest is the ellipse of the bucket shadow on her face is a bit pixelated. It might need a little blurring as shadows also have that too. The ending with the crack was a bit silly but I know it was used as a transition (since it loops).

[The LAST SODA on Earth: Strange Scavenger]

I just love that Abu has her name on her wallet. It makes me wonder if shes been robbed before.

Great story, but the writing is a bit choppy, sometimes theres no dialogue and it gets awkward, sometimes the writing itself is strangely out of place, and sometimes its just the timing, where it feels like a scene is dragging to show characters emotions. The va's were great, but theres also moments when I almost wanted them to be louder, more rowdy! More invested in the scene. I feel like there wasn't any excitement in moments where they could've yelled. The interchanging styles were nice, but it feels like you relied heavily on 3D and the 2d was a cheap 'gimmick' almost, I think giving some more scenes the 2d treatment or making the 2d scene longer would go a long way.

One of my favorite parts was the "party" neon signs, I think its a cool way to show her team atm. The lip sync was good, I like the style overall and the effects are nice. I hope you keep improving!

[Try not to Blink | Cat Funnies (2018)]

Great short, very silly. Thanks for reassuring me about the jumpscare you never know. Glad to see this for the first time, despite it not being new.

[GAMECADE | ep2: You're not Beth]

Wow this is great. I had a great time watching this episode, I like Nance and her chaotic energy and bad influence on gluse is fun to watch. i love the part where they get drawn, and the burger maker game the boss was playing was a nice reference/easter egg. Ofc, Gianni screaming "slushy glushy" was hilarious as well. Awesome work on this!

[Netflix and chill]

it was very silly, i think some of the dialogue was a little off, like her saying "i do it too" didn't have the same impact cause of the grammar. The room with the T.V. scene was a little wonky, and it cut out before the scene ended. The photos of the room were kinda different in style, but I like the style of the characters. I hope you make the backgrounds in the future! Good job.

teemovsall responds:

I agree

[ICHI-NI-SAN (Adobe Animate 2024)]

Very cute artsyle, the animation is fun and the outline definitely helps the character stand out from the background. Nice 2011-2014 AMV style animation!

[RaW tImE!!]

The SEQUEL. I love her wacky facial expressions

[ENA: Dream BBQ Chapter 1 - Release Date Trailer]

Incredible trailer, a nice treat. Not long at all and not too short, but just enough to peak interest! I'm very excited.