I just love that Abu has her name on her wallet. It makes me wonder if shes been robbed before.
Great story, but the writing is a bit choppy, sometimes theres no dialogue and it gets awkward, sometimes the writing itself is strangely out of place, and sometimes its just the timing, where it feels like a scene is dragging to show characters emotions. The va's were great, but theres also moments when I almost wanted them to be louder, more rowdy! More invested in the scene. I feel like there wasn't any excitement in moments where they could've yelled. The interchanging styles were nice, but it feels like you relied heavily on 3D and the 2d was a cheap 'gimmick' almost, I think giving some more scenes the 2d treatment or making the 2d scene longer would go a long way.
One of my favorite parts was the "party" neon signs, I think its a cool way to show her team atm. The lip sync was good, I like the style overall and the effects are nice. I hope you keep improving!