MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wn'M #2 – Watch Your Step]

Not the yoda death sound effect xD I love your clean and quality animations, this is a fun and well made short! Great animation and your character is fun and very emotive. I like the fitting bgs and bgm you include in your videos too, all the sound effects really tie it together. I love it!

The only thing I would suggest is the ellipse of the bucket shadow on her face is a bit pixelated. It might need a little blurring as shadows also have that too. The ending with the crack was a bit silly but I know it was used as a transition (since it loops).

[The LAST SODA on Earth: Strange Scavenger]

I just love that Abu has her name on her wallet. It makes me wonder if shes been robbed before.

Great story, but the writing is a bit choppy, sometimes theres no dialogue and it gets awkward, sometimes the writing itself is strangely out of place, and sometimes its just the timing, where it feels like a scene is dragging to show characters emotions. The va's were great, but theres also moments when I almost wanted them to be louder, more rowdy! More invested in the scene. I feel like there wasn't any excitement in moments where they could've yelled. The interchanging styles were nice, but it feels like you relied heavily on 3D and the 2d was a cheap 'gimmick' almost, I think giving some more scenes the 2d treatment or making the 2d scene longer would go a long way.

One of my favorite parts was the "party" neon signs, I think its a cool way to show her team atm. The lip sync was good, I like the style overall and the effects are nice. I hope you keep improving!

[Try not to Blink | Cat Funnies (2018)]

Great short, very silly. Thanks for reassuring me about the jumpscare you never know. Glad to see this for the first time, despite it not being new.

[GAMECADE | ep2: You're not Beth]

Wow this is great. I had a great time watching this episode, I like Nance and her chaotic energy and bad influence on gluse is fun to watch. i love the part where they get drawn, and the burger maker game the boss was playing was a nice reference/easter egg. Ofc, Gianni screaming "slushy glushy" was hilarious as well. Awesome work on this!

[Netflix and chill]

it was very silly, i think some of the dialogue was a little off, like her saying "i do it too" didn't have the same impact cause of the grammar. The room with the T.V. scene was a little wonky, and it cut out before the scene ended. The photos of the room were kinda different in style, but I like the style of the characters. I hope you make the backgrounds in the future! Good job.

teemovsall responds:

I agree

[ICHI-NI-SAN (Adobe Animate 2024)]

Very cute artsyle, the animation is fun and the outline definitely helps the character stand out from the background. Nice 2011-2014 AMV style animation!

[RaW tImE!!]

The SEQUEL. I love her wacky facial expressions

[ENA: Dream BBQ Chapter 1 - Release Date Trailer]

Incredible trailer, a nice treat. Not long at all and not too short, but just enough to peak interest! I'm very excited.

[(old) Tetos with Hats]

tet, tet... I love this and you animated them so sillily! I love your animations and its refreshing to see non- funkin content.

[Wacky Lesbian Hour: Ep 3]

Wow this is great, I love the animation, and the writing is great, perfect plot and small jokes that make the episode lively. It was very polished and clean. Hazbin could never get this much advertising for free!