MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[You're the most repulsive person I have ever met]

very cool i dont think i get it and the meme audio in the wedding was really loud, good job though

Quonit responds:

The youtube version has subtitles which make it more clear 😅 Sorry about that!

+ Transcript is added in the description now

[TIME-ZERO x Oliver & Friends / TV show session]

I think your timing needs work, but that's only because i don't hear any voices filling in some of the empty spaces, so i could be wrong there. Even though this is just an animatic, i'm interested to see what more you have to share of this original story and characters.

AlanBritoAN responds:

yeeeh, is just a little work what i did ni the past whit characters of my friend and mine, but i publish this because i dont get voices, and the school get all of my time ☠.

and thanks so much, I appreciate the advice ❤❤❤

[Meru Meme Dance]

You said everything drawn by you, i think you meant done. I feel like you tried making the dance a bit too realistic as she doesn't glide around like most characters do for this trend, and she started a bit late. Nice job but you can make it a bit longer and fix the timing on your next work.

Skeith990 responds:

Thank you for the critique.

Honestly my reference were 2d animation I found since I didn't know the names of the dance sequences.

First bit, I have drawn the asset, but if you can elaberate since I fail to understand the difference.

I'll try to be more careful with the timing.

[Playable Memories]

This is the type of video you must watch twice. You do such a great job at making your characters and shots, (which essentially make the world you are portraying) very human.

There are so many details I loved! When you show a shot being captured on video you took a lot of real life situations into account when making these scenes. Some of my favorites were the one at 00:53 where the car headlights can be seen in the distance emerging onto the road, or 02:10 the car windshield wipers sliding across the windshield making streaks, and 02:24 where the bird flies off the roof but the camera follows it a bit before losing track just as a real person would attempt to do. I can go on but I think you understand this the most as you made the movie.

You are an excellent creator making this believable world in a short amount of time, I know backgrounds aren't always easy. I do think the walk cycle at 00:27 is floaty so just watch out for that. I enjoyed seeing the film on the t.v. at the end, there is just so much packed into here. Excellent work.

SAMI-OURS responds:

My gosh! I didn't know you paid so much attention to all the elements of the video. right! In addition to the elements you mentioned, the implementation of various other details was also for the naturalness of the video. Thanks for recognizing these aspects. And, You also talked about the cons! It is difficult for any scene to walk with the whole body out, and you noticed the unnaturalness of that scene. I thought wouldn't notice it because it was so short. But I just caught by your detailed appreciation! Still, I'm just glad Thanks for savoring my video.

[Necos relaxation time]

I'm a bit confused, what exactly did you do? You said thanks to Neco Puppeteers for the animation, you used Pepsi man ads in the tv, and you didn't make the lo-fi minecraft beats, so you pretty much edited it together? I think its fine to use sprites from games if you are making something original with them. This doesn't seem original or new. I hope you make something worth watching in the future!

darkbolt99 responds:

hellothis animation is an experimental video
and I made it by myself taking concepts from NecoPuppeteers and Melty Blood
I will try to improve in the future.

[DRTC #001 DUBBED]

i love the intro, but since its a comic dub its a bit underwhelming. the characters are fun and it was short and sweet.

usernameMike responds:

Thanks for the input! I'm trying out some new stuff, so I started with something simple. Glad you enjoyed it regardless!

[Dr. Good's Operating Theatre 2022]

Wow Dr. Goods operating theater was awesome. i thought a lot of the submissions were good but i loved each intermission with Dr Good, because I thought he was a very funny well written character. Great voice acting by Gianni as well. i am also glad to see some familiar animators. like MattyBurrito in this collab. My two favorite submissions were Dr. Bad and Monster in my bathtub, i loved those! Nicely done everyone.

DannyGoodShirt responds:

Thanks for watching! Happy you liked the Dr Good character. He is fun to write & Gianni is a pro

[Commission prewiev chart🍷]

really good animation, especially the smoke and teleports, but why didn't you finish it? this is for your commissions so you should show what you can do including colors. hopefully more finished anims to come?

LordMaksMiks responds:

Video is a prewiev its still being coloring and ended soon

[Full Automation Trailer]

the animation was okay, the style is what put me off most. it feels like the line thickness was always different and changing scene to scene. the voice was fine but without subtitles i dont think i could understand it. i know this is for a game but it could use some help.

5ta5 responds:

Valid points, I rushed the trailer a little bit (and didn't get the chance to redraw the lineart) :P
As for the voice, i tried and i failed, i really wanted a robot voice ... that's why it is hard to understand .... that's why the subtitles are there :}

[just a slime jumping]

pretty good animation, i think it needs some more spongy feeling in the air, the squish on the floor is really flat. good background and good track.

DocArt responds:

yeah, i was thinking the same, it would look so nice if ithe slime look more, squishy or smth, thanks for the feedback