MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[What's Funny? - TFPS]

This was really good, I enjoyed the pacing of the animation from start to finish and the characters were interesting. Nice music and fitting stylistic backgrounds, it was cute and fun. My only gripe though is when the orange fox wolf dude changed his voice to a female voice instead of using his guy voice to pretend to be a girl i think that would've been funnier. He was also quiet at the end.

HOwLiNG-MAdFoxHatter responds:

Am glad you enjoyed overall : D

[Seafoam Episode 8 - Crashing Waves]

I think you have something interesting here, a series with great voice actors and a simple attractive art style.

However, I am worried that you will overlook things or push out the episodes to completion and compromise its quality. There are already moments in this episode where pauses were long and awkward, the animation was minimal, and details were left out like a lean in for a kiss and proper shine animation for the glasses, Please take your time making something you enjoy, because that is what will make this series stand out, do not rush!

AphrosAnimation responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review!

Sometimes I feel this series would have done better as a comic- as I’m more of a storyboarder than an animator. But I do love all the atmosphere I can add with voiceovers and music!

[Homeward]

Homeward, I loved the youtube version with the alternate song, it makes more sense because the characters don't speak as you listen to the song lyrics.

But even more than that I adore the details you put into the animation and visual art. The building that the train passes by, the way the lighting affects the characters, and the blurs as the characters go in and out of focus to the camera, its superb. My favorite though was the camera angles, the camera in the door as it slams closed, and the shot through the mouth of the relatives costume. Even when the angles changed the movement was flowing like a live action film as she continued to pull the mask off. Also you need to post that art in the art portal it's so good, I would buy that as a poster!

5/5 Stars; thank you for putting the youtube version in the description.

SAMI-OURS responds:

Thank you so much for your detailed evaluation! As you said, I put in a lot of camera effects for realistic movement. I spent a lot of time here. I think 30% of the production period was spent here! It's worth it because you recognized. I'm not good enough to sell anything yet. But I'll try to make it happen. Thanks a lot!

[Red World DX Collab]

Could NOT trust the movie as a whole after the flash of white to black on ones you should of reviewed this movie a few more times before deciding, 'eh an epilepsy warning should make do.' No, no it doesn't, its not enough to say "this video contains flashing lights" because they're not lights its a straight up seizure waiting to happen when you add a scene like that. Since it's a collab it can be blamed on one artist but I digress, Valbun the publisher watched it (or should of) before uploading which means its the publishers fault as well.

Other than that, the music was mediocre, I get its a style and I'm just not the target audience. the art was fun and the variety was there but this movie needs help in those areas. Review, your, work.

ValerieHell responds:

idk what more you could want from a warning dude

[Lucky Shart]

This was a really good parody of lucky star, I was concerned this was gonna be something totally different from the thumbnail, so I'm glad it was good. The wiping part was the best xD

Joe-Mega responds:

That puts a big dumb smile on my face!

[Lighten Up Mewx (Part 1)]

i liked it but i didnt get the live action part in the beginning

Mewx responds:

Wanted to use the music my friend made lol

[Shirley's Stocking Up]

its really short and cute, nice little anim -w-

Aster-Effect responds:

thank you very much :D

[Fridaynightfunkin animation + Credits]

very cute just had a bit of a quality issue, and was very choppy

Atara-Parakitty responds:

I tried to fix the quality issue but no luck

[CaramelDansen Collab 2020]

the heck is this dude the song is not the original h

Octo responds:

https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1407402#:~:text=Newgrounds%20does%20not%20permit%20copyright,on%20another's%20intellectual%20property%20rights.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use

[Trader Ricks]

eh it felt like you just watch bushland adventures and made this in 48 hours h

heyopc responds:

this is my lifes work..........