MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TIME-ZERO x Oliver & Friends / TV show session]

I think your timing needs work, but that's only because i don't hear any voices filling in some of the empty spaces, so i could be wrong there. Even though this is just an animatic, i'm interested to see what more you have to share of this original story and characters.

AlanBritoAN responds:

yeeeh, is just a little work what i did ni the past whit characters of my friend and mine, but i publish this because i dont get voices, and the school get all of my time ☠.

and thanks so much, I appreciate the advice ❤❤❤

[Sora Kingdom Hearts Tinkerbell summon]

I really like your sketchy art style, the colors and the animation look nice and reminds me of a transformation sequence. The ending is a little abrupt but the animation is short. I hope you continue to post your original stuff on newgrounds too, nice stuff.

[Animated Pixels #1 - Lilith]

Im not too sure how reposts are treated on NG but I usually roll my eyes when i see retweets of an artists art on twitter just because they think they didn't get the views it deserves, but i'm not accusing you, that's my opinion, because when i do click on an artists profile and see they have only done 3 things with 6 posts its underwhelming, instead of making something new and then your other stuff getting attention as well because of it.

ANYWAYS tangent aside, the animation was nice and the music was dark and eerie, your clients character is cool and i think your loop is well done. The shaded background is a nice stylistic choice. I hope you make bigger and longer things in the future!

[Meru Meme Dance]

You said everything drawn by you, i think you meant done. I feel like you tried making the dance a bit too realistic as she doesn't glide around like most characters do for this trend, and she started a bit late. Nice job but you can make it a bit longer and fix the timing on your next work.

Skeith990 responds:

Thank you for the critique.

Honestly my reference were 2d animation I found since I didn't know the names of the dance sequences.

First bit, I have drawn the asset, but if you can elaberate since I fail to understand the difference.

I'll try to be more careful with the timing.

[Kulinkitaka]

This is very cute, and i appreciate the squib voice mixing.

[Meet the Buttsteak]

Felt like a SFM short, but was nicely 2D animated, well done.

[Playable Memories]

This is the type of video you must watch twice. You do such a great job at making your characters and shots, (which essentially make the world you are portraying) very human.

There are so many details I loved! When you show a shot being captured on video you took a lot of real life situations into account when making these scenes. Some of my favorites were the one at 00:53 where the car headlights can be seen in the distance emerging onto the road, or 02:10 the car windshield wipers sliding across the windshield making streaks, and 02:24 where the bird flies off the roof but the camera follows it a bit before losing track just as a real person would attempt to do. I can go on but I think you understand this the most as you made the movie.

You are an excellent creator making this believable world in a short amount of time, I know backgrounds aren't always easy. I do think the walk cycle at 00:27 is floaty so just watch out for that. I enjoyed seeing the film on the t.v. at the end, there is just so much packed into here. Excellent work.

SAMI-OURS responds:

My gosh! I didn't know you paid so much attention to all the elements of the video. right! In addition to the elements you mentioned, the implementation of various other details was also for the naturalness of the video. Thanks for recognizing these aspects. And, You also talked about the cons! It is difficult for any scene to walk with the whole body out, and you noticed the unnaturalness of that scene. I thought wouldn't notice it because it was so short. But I just caught by your detailed appreciation! Still, I'm just glad Thanks for savoring my video.

[Necos relaxation time]

I'm a bit confused, what exactly did you do? You said thanks to Neco Puppeteers for the animation, you used Pepsi man ads in the tv, and you didn't make the lo-fi minecraft beats, so you pretty much edited it together? I think its fine to use sprites from games if you are making something original with them. This doesn't seem original or new. I hope you make something worth watching in the future!

darkbolt99 responds:

hellothis animation is an experimental video
and I made it by myself taking concepts from NecoPuppeteers and Melty Blood
I will try to improve in the future.

[Fiammetta]

i like your style but the pacing needs some work! When she was calming down maybe she could breathe heavily, and walking past the mirrors could be slower too. Very strange music choice... it didn't seem fitting at all. The sound design, colors and backgrounds were really well done though. nice job, i hope you keep improving.

[Opossum Mama]

its cute but short, i think the possum animations a little slow, and there is no audio!