MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[How to ALWAYS win at Splatoon!!!!! NOT CLICKBAIT]

Very cute style, i like the subtle movements and the fade of color from the squid girl, nicely done!

[fantastic]

I love dunkey! great animation and i like the hop and explosion, so expressive with a simple style.

[HEADSTONE HAUNT]

Nice little toon played by a band of goons! I like the angles you used in the animation, but my favorite part is the little witch doodle seen in the bottom left of the crowd, that is so silly. i love it.

[Psycho Essence #9 Joining the Agents]

This was wacky and awesome! I loved the mix media of the project, and this is my first introduction to your series. I like the use of starwars sound effects I can tell it is a big inspiration. I will have to check out the other episodes.

[OneyPlays Animated - Spongebeta]

This was so good! Amazing attention to detail, you did so good including corey as himself wearing a costume in this bit, i can't get over how expressive they are. I love it!

[Give me a drink but it's Saloonatics]

Theres a lot of long pauses in your video, and the lip sync was a bit wonky. i like the style but try to tidy up the little detailes like the line under the bartenders eye as he squints.

[TIME-ZERO x Oliver & Friends / TV show session]

I think your timing needs work, but that's only because i don't hear any voices filling in some of the empty spaces, so i could be wrong there. Even though this is just an animatic, i'm interested to see what more you have to share of this original story and characters.

AlanBritoAN responds:

yeeeh, is just a little work what i did ni the past whit characters of my friend and mine, but i publish this because i dont get voices, and the school get all of my time ☠.

and thanks so much, I appreciate the advice ❤❤❤

[Sora Kingdom Hearts Tinkerbell summon]

I really like your sketchy art style, the colors and the animation look nice and reminds me of a transformation sequence. The ending is a little abrupt but the animation is short. I hope you continue to post your original stuff on newgrounds too, nice stuff.

[Animated Pixels #1 - Lilith]

Im not too sure how reposts are treated on NG but I usually roll my eyes when i see retweets of an artists art on twitter just because they think they didn't get the views it deserves, but i'm not accusing you, that's my opinion, because when i do click on an artists profile and see they have only done 3 things with 6 posts its underwhelming, instead of making something new and then your other stuff getting attention as well because of it.

ANYWAYS tangent aside, the animation was nice and the music was dark and eerie, your clients character is cool and i think your loop is well done. The shaded background is a nice stylistic choice. I hope you make bigger and longer things in the future!

[Meru Meme Dance]

You said everything drawn by you, i think you meant done. I feel like you tried making the dance a bit too realistic as she doesn't glide around like most characters do for this trend, and she started a bit late. Nice job but you can make it a bit longer and fix the timing on your next work.

Skeith990 responds:

Thank you for the critique.

Honestly my reference were 2d animation I found since I didn't know the names of the dance sequences.

First bit, I have drawn the asset, but if you can elaberate since I fail to understand the difference.

I'll try to be more careful with the timing.