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the end was really nice, this episode was a little slow but it has nice visuals.

Super awesome animation, i love the soundtrack for it. the animation and style looks great, i love that they are very expressive and cartoony and believable in the writing. awesome job to everyone on the team. i think the only bad thing i have to say is some of the sound effects aren't timed correctly.

really good clips here, is there supposed to be music? i think her walking is a bit too fast, especially in the forest, the end part was my favorite overall.

smidg3n responds:

I agree I think the walkings a bit fast lol, and yeah these weren't composited with the final audio so I just have my files haha
Thank you!

I have noticed your videos are getting better. however im not sure how long you spend on each short, i think that reviewing them a few more times before uploading would be a good idea. at 30 seconds the soda stops too fast, i know your videos can be snappy and quick but (to me) this isnt part of that charm. keep improving!

cool, but at 15 seconds the text grows for some reason.

those veins were no joke. good job on the animations

so good, im loving the principals design.

this is awesome! id love to see more animations like this. i love the weapon transition, the hair flow, and her expressions!

I like the trailer! Cool stuff.
Not to nitpick but i did notice around the 5 second mark on the green wheel, the arrows got a bit finicky. If this was intentional maybe try highlighting them with a glow! I also think fade outs for audio in trailers are a little boring. I would also recommend doing a studio reverb echo effect instead? Idk but keep it up!

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