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Excellent, i love both versions.

Dude no. This is giving me a headache. Go look up a "How to get flash free" tutorial on YouTube, get off Flipaclip and don't record audio from another device it sounds horrible. You can improve but until then get this off the site.

really good animation, especially the smoke and teleports, but why didn't you finish it? this is for your commissions so you should show what you can do including colors. hopefully more finished anims to come?

MaksMiks responds:

Video is a prewiev its still being coloring and ended soon

nice, he does vanish at the end though, and the quality is low!

This was very different from the original scene, i love the final result it looks really good with the filter and all. The 3d animation is well done!

i like your take on this scene, i love how you animated puppycat, and closed his eyes at the end, where in the original he was gazing out the window. nice!

really solid take on this meme, i like the style too! Nice background.

however, why does it just CUT at 2:08? you gotta watch the anim the whole way through before uploading bro! rookie mistake.

so are these the two people in your brain? why do they look different? is the style inspired by someone? the lip sync looks just like jaiden animations and its alrite but the tongue one is used alot, i have lots of questions but good little short overall, could use some color tho.

the animation was okay, the style is what put me off most. it feels like the line thickness was always different and changing scene to scene. the voice was fine but without subtitles i dont think i could understand it. i know this is for a game but it could use some help.

5ta5 responds:

Valid points, I rushed the trailer a little bit (and didn't get the chance to redraw the lineart) :P
As for the voice, i tried and i failed, i really wanted a robot voice ... that's why it is hard to understand .... that's why the subtitles are there :}

pretty good animation, i think it needs some more spongy feeling in the air, the squish on the floor is really flat. good background and good track.

DocArt responds:

yeah, i was thinking the same, it would look so nice if ithe slime look more, squishy or smth, thanks for the feedback

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