MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Temporary Paralysis | SAFE MODE: 04]

i love this animation, great job setting the scene with the intro and the voice acting is really good. i like the flower and the constant smokey background going on.

[Mecha pokemon battle. (Lucario Vs Garchomp)]

you love mechas! cool stuff, it was a bit choppy in some places though. really solid when the parts are breaking and being destroyed.

[Frontiers]

i like the backgrounds you made for this animations, i appreciate that you made sonics grunts it fills in the quietness. i think it was great until the the explosion at the end with the audio and logo. great job tho!

[Sweet Tooth]

I like the song, and sweet tooth is a nice character. congrats on 6th place!

Toastcrumch responds:

aww thank you so much!! :D

[The 5th Birthday]

really well done animation.

[Calli Vs. Gura: SMOL SHOWDOWN]

the fight animation was actually really good, i think the slow parts were minimal but its understandable. the perspective of the trident was my favorite part, nicely done! i hope you make more things like this in the future. (with hardcore fight scenes)

[The Island Is Up To No Good! (Pilot)]

i love the writing, but the jokes weren't funny, and i will admit the end was a little abrupt despite it being part of the joke. i mean the fact the time machine appeared and they were sitting there for 14 seconds felt too short. Also at the end the scientist character didnt have the smiley face drawn on his brain helmet, it would of been nice to see him wipe it clean as they teleported back or something. the jokes being jump cuts is mainly what i didnt like. so many cuts and it didn't treat the project nicely. I would relate this more to a family guy skit than anything else. like i said i like the writing but the pacing was decent, again the jump cuts ruined it for me. since this is an animatic/storyboard i cant say much for the animation. but my least favorite was the voices, i would suggest getting other talent to do some of the characters, im not a fan of the pitching of your own voice for other characters.

WillHeff responds:

Hey thanks for your thoughts yeah it's def not for everyone. I wanted it be very snappy and quick paced which can always be hit or miss.

He didn't have a smile because if they went back in time, he never met them

[Flying Bum (Super Ass Hero)]

nice song, i can't say its surprising or new i feel like this has been done before. good job

[Edison Screw]

pretty good skit, could use some bgs. lets go!

[Chaotic Heart: Season 2 - The Starved and the Serpent (Episode 1)]

it is a solid origin story, i like that she didnt really hesitate when the creature said eternal bond, and i also like that it got dark at the end. revenge is a bitter beverage best served cold.