MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monkey Wrench 2 - Lythop Liberation]

Wow this episode came out so great! The voice acting is top notch and the animation was fantastic, I loved the fight sequence. Even though its shorter and more compact than episode 1 it was really well made.

[Solace: The River]

This was pretty good dude, great ideas here as always, but it feels like they aren't polished.

I think the swipe transitions need to be used more frequently so they don't stick out so much. The character is cool but when he was surrounded by the dragons I am wondering why his face was still in chibi mode, it looked odd since he looked the same from far away. When all the dragons flew away at the end I didn't know that all 3 flew until I rewatched it because the animation was close together plus the sounds weren't clear enough to distinguish them going one after another. After that when one is in the sky it looked like he turned into a scribble since he wasn't colored in, I understand that could be a stylistic choice but it didn't fit with the style of the episode as a whole. Just my critique after watching, I hope you keep making them better.

[Yanny [NewgroundsTV Bumper]]

This bumper definitely feels inspired by adult swim, its good and i do like it, but having that grittier dirtier feeling of fast dnb is what i think of when i think of newgrounds. Great job it looks cool!

[Yestercade [NewgroundsTV Bumper]]

I love the way fancy pants was animated in this, so much detail on the cabinets. I love it!

[NEON SHOCK [NewgroundsTV Bumper]]

I can't get over how cool this is, I was a big fan of the newgrounds everything by everyone intro and this is that vibe x10! Amazing job guys.

[[Teaser]]

Cool, i didn't get the ending because i dont know japanese. I hope you make more original stuff!

BlueStickBoi responds:

Tyy I sure will- oh and the ending was just my oc's name, which is 'Blue'! :]

[NECRO-NANCY 64: Spooky House trailer]

I'm so excited! We finally get to see more renwick, idk how to spell his name. The first person bits look so cool, awesome job!

[Why not just let the computer animate for me?]

This video screams "I don't really care about this big controversial art topic, but I'm going to poke fun at it." despite your claim to 'decide if its good or not,' before I realized this video was a huge gigantic joke.

Your art style and backgrounds are really appealing and they are nice to look at. Other than that I was not a fan of relatively anything else in this video, and I'll explain why. The storytime genre is filled to capacity with these cheap and lazy knock off odd1sout and jaiden animation clones that try to be the funny awkward art kid others can relate to. So what makes your series stand out?

The animation is lacking in every sense of the word, which surprises me that you aren't making these videos frequently. The characters motions are choppy and spongy which is another easily overused technique a lot of animators in the genre use. Using the excuse "Yes I got lazy on this part don't judge me I've been working on this for months" both didn't make sense and wasn't necessary. If the note wasn't in the corner I would've assumed nothing was different and it was a stylistic choice since it's just as choppy and didn't stand out much at all. The character design is simple and the design looks like it has taken inspiration from henry stickman or adventure time. As you might be able to tell from my icon I have characters with 3 spikes of hair as well, it's fun and easy to draw. But the bandages and shell face mask don't intrigue me they just seem overly stereo-typically edgy and does not match the characters personality or voice at all. The voice of your character is not bad, it's just a guy talking and the lack of tone in your voice makes even you seem disinterested or bored of the content I am watching from you. The other characters you voice also have this annoying voice filter that is ugly and difficult to listen to, like an echo from a application that wasn't supposed to be in the recording. The ai computer was better but the poor writing and lack of entertaining puns made it unbearable. As comedy is subjective I'll say that nothing stuck out as original and it felt like the two major jokes in the video fell flat right after delivery.

If you would like to continue making these talk-time-like videos I hope they get better. I understand that its a hobby and its meant to be fun, so if you enjoy it that's whats important.

[Cherries short]

Great short, I love the joke and the repeated sound effect was funny, great stylistic choice and visuals!