MrShoeShine7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[4koma Girls- It's hip to be well-rounded]

Some of the poses the characters were in are a little inconsistent. Especially at the start. The designs and character writing are great. I like the pause effect of the panels when they are done animating, but the colors on the characters disappearing is distracting, like the character on the right in the first panel, since her pupils were black maybe they should stay black? I also noticed you included the characters names in the description, but as a new viewer I don't know who is who.

The voices were good, but the line delivery needs to be convincing, the mic quality also didn't help as there was background noise in the recordings. The glasses character has a fitting voice but the second sounds like a boy, and I wasn't sure if that was on purpose. Some backgrounds might also contribute well to the comic instead of the blank white void! I hope you improve.

zachdewd responds:

Thanks man.

[You can't commision me]

the animatic is okay. the laugh cutoff was really strange, and the blue is hard to see. poses and expressions need to be easier to read in the boarding stage. I couldn't tell if the hands were meant to be peace signs or "okay" hands. keep working hard!

dew60 responds:

Yeah I think I might fix a little the next time I revisit

[DE_dust2: Hacker's Wrath Tribute]

Wow this is legendary. Not only did you bring back the old stickfigure counter strike series 10 years later, but you and the team put in so much hard work in the writing, animation, the style of it and the 3d shots were really cool. The music choices were perfect as well! I think my favorite part was both the beginning and the end, they were so well executed it was hard for me to choose. Amazing job guys!

[Cosmohedron]

This was super cool, I loved the transitions and the characters that were all shown at the end. Great work on this video dude, I loved it.

[Scared of Me - Kheil Animation]

The animation is so good, I love your style and the background is exceedingly simple but gorgeous nonetheless. I admire the short for what it is. Great work!

BMBrice responds:

Thanks a lot! I wanted to keep the BG simple since I'm trying out 3D paintovers

[Sublo Gets A Battle Royale]

This was a fun parody, I loved the voices. Great stuff dude

Tiltro responds:

Let the seas be calm and the wind be short, I would like to rest and wait till the chief comes and greets the morning and I don’t where I’m going with this. The voice actors are cool their stuff is very cool.

[Newgrounds Dreamcast Collab]

This needs to be called the re4 collab at this point, excited for the other pieces.

[Super Mario Land in 7 minutes ANIMATED]

This is amazing! I loved the animation, your style is funny as ever. It's also great that the style is even more consistent in this one. I love the jokes and the sounds and music. Mario, you dog.

[COOL TIMES: FUNNY GUY]

I loved the animation, gorgeous motion and visuals. The crocs voice actress was great but the mic quality put me off. It was a fun watch! I am excited to see the story continue.

[POPIPO (Cupid you’re Stupid)]

Cool short, theres a bit of a flash in the middle of the animation, try rewatching it a few times to make sure there isn't any dead space. Nice job timing the legs with the song!

DranoinmyBraino responds:

Ugh, you’re right- sorry :(