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I think you have something interesting here, a series with great voice actors and a simple attractive art style.

However, I am worried that you will overlook things or push out the episodes to completion and compromise its quality. There are already moments in this episode where pauses were long and awkward, the animation was minimal, and details were left out like a lean in for a kiss and proper shine animation for the glasses, Please take your time making something you enjoy, because that is what will make this series stand out, do not rush!

AphrosAnimation responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review!

Sometimes I feel this series would have done better as a comic- as I’m more of a storyboarder than an animator. But I do love all the atmosphere I can add with voiceovers and music!

its true they are just cat buttholes and im surprised no ones made a animation about it sooner

i remember seeing your videos and this is the last one it seems, i hope you make things that you enjoy and make you happiest. Teddy seemed mad all the time he needs to chill the most.

Homeward, I loved the youtube version with the alternate song, it makes more sense because the characters don't speak as you listen to the song lyrics.

But even more than that I adore the details you put into the animation and visual art. The building that the train passes by, the way the lighting affects the characters, and the blurs as the characters go in and out of focus to the camera, its superb. My favorite though was the camera angles, the camera in the door as it slams closed, and the shot through the mouth of the relatives costume. Even when the angles changed the movement was flowing like a live action film as she continued to pull the mask off. Also you need to post that art in the art portal it's so good, I would buy that as a poster!

5/5 Stars; thank you for putting the youtube version in the description.

SAMI-OURS responds:

Thank you so much for your detailed evaluation! As you said, I put in a lot of camera effects for realistic movement. I spent a lot of time here. I think 30% of the production period was spent here! It's worth it because you recognized. I'm not good enough to sell anything yet. But I'll try to make it happen. Thanks a lot!

It has a good style but the animation had too many fade in and outs, it didn't seem necessary. I also noticed when you flipped the characters like the dead animal, the eye was bulging out on the left instead of the right. The rat on salad fingers's head for hair was a funny touch

alrite the facial expressions were good but its okay, i dunno too short for me

the pencil drawn style is a very appealing part of this short film, really nice job on the details.

this is exactly the kinda jokes me and my friends made after seeing the movie haha

this was freaking awesome, i could play them side by side and notice all the similarities, but without even having to do that i love how accurate the walk cycle is haha

Very cool!

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