I think you have something interesting here, a series with great voice actors and a simple attractive art style.
However, I am worried that you will overlook things or push out the episodes to completion and compromise its quality. There are already moments in this episode where pauses were long and awkward, the animation was minimal, and details were left out like a lean in for a kiss and proper shine animation for the glasses, Please take your time making something you enjoy, because that is what will make this series stand out, do not rush!