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So cool, and... CUTE! I loved it, what a great short. Shes a beast with a sweet tooth.

I love your characters and your style is really cute! The animation was choppy and kind of reminded me of a nintendo ds game, like an opening sequence where the game begins. I think the thought bubbles blended with the background so maybe use some white or a fade to show the thought bubbles and distinguish it a bit more. I liked it but I think you can make these better!

As much as I love the intro, you should have the warning before that as well since it contains bright flashes of light. I know the order makes sense to have the intro, then the warning, then the movie but your intro is a bit flashy and that's what comes with it imo. With that out of the way, the animation was good, it was high quality and the style made it feel like a video game. I like the camera movement as well, the zoom ins and pans were awesome. The sound effects were also really good, the little details like the snowfall and the eyes twitching caught my attention. Really nice work!

At first I thought his wishes were being granted, but it could also be a time skip. I liked seeing him draw the bunny on the leaf, the animation was really good, but the voice acting for the 'stached fellow was a little underwhelming. The main guy was very chatty at first and at the end they were both speechless. I'm loving the sound effects and small musical cues!

It was a nice short, the ending is very abrupt though. The animation was good and the characters were very similar it was hard to see who was who sometimes.

Wow the animation was so good, the characters were contrasting (in a good way) and the boob fondling game was funny to see! Great job on both the humor and the execution of the cartoon. The voices were the cherry on top.

It was good, I think most of the animation were simple tweens and parallaxing which isn't my favorite. The transitions came out good, and the timing with the song was well done. at 2:39 the anatomy is not right, his arm looks unnatural. Since you didn't make the music I'm strictly judging the visuals. Keep improving Kol-Belov

What a day to be a pixel, I love how you animated dad and me, really nice effects and details in the backgrounds. It feels like fathers day came early this year!

The characters are very jiggly. I loved the crazy style, but the black in the beginning could of been something a little more creative since pokemon battles usually start with that blocky spiral. It's a good parody, you didnt have much to say in the description but my favorite part was when big chilli was biting his fingers at 0:23!

TheMagmaMuncher responds:

I wanted to put something like that in the opening but I didn’t want too many flashing lights and crap

The animation concept was crazy and well done, you really brought the song to life with the visuals. I would recommend you be careful with the flashing lights at 2:44 especially since there is not an epilepsy warning.

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