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WOW the animation blew me away, all the coloring, shading, animation, and story, even the voice actors were great! Absolutely great work on this.

Despite it being a trailer, being thrown into a world with a story like this takes more time for an audience to be connected with the characters more, for instance the grandpas death was very sudden, and the call to adventure seemed rushed too. Just a few things I thought might help your final product if you are planning one!

PiratePudding responds:

I'm happy you enjoyed the trailer, thanks alot for the comment!
I must point out that the grandfather isn't dead. He's captured. The attackers don't use the sharp edge of the weapons when they attack, and the dialog in the end also reinforces that.
I'll do more to make it clearer next time. ;)

I HAD TO REPLAY! lmao she loves chef. I can't believe you reanimated this whole ad, and with your own twist! awesome awesome stuff hahaha i remember seeing these on tv and making fun of it because its not logical for the can to go to your house.

this felt like an advertisement, the art was great! but the 360 around the character was kind of choppy.

Lifepoint1 responds:

Thanks for the review! Yeah the 360 scene was a challenge for me. I still need a lot of practice. I'll try to improve on things like that in the future. Glad you still found it relatively enjoyable.

lol, cool story bro, but the audio might need to be upped a bit!

LOVED the animation, the characters were very wacky and unique, it had a good flow to it, and the space scene was appealing as well! hope more content with similar quality comes out soon.

This had a good start, i laughed a bit, but then he said "fag"! even though he stated he doesn't curse. :( Anyways, the most confusing part was when the picture of the old man came onto the screen, and that weird chip-tune like track started playing. It interrupted your review!

icyentertainment responds:

Listen, if you are 15 or younger, enjoy your childhood. Enjoy relaxing life in high school and high school and enjoy giving you something. Do not grow up, because once you grow up, you can not look back. Please enjoy your childhood.

Very creative! i liked the after effects you added to it. But the character design might need work, good stuff!

ChrisMckiernan responds:

Thank you for the feedback:)

Yeah, it was very appealing to watch, great job!

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